Feedback from pitch

We have a lot of good feed back on our idea.

Genre:
All of the audience have relised that the film is a romance/tradgedy.

Target audience:
This seemed to be a problem many of the audience didnt answer this question or simply put a question mark. This was proberly a problem because me and josh didnt even think of a target audience. Some people have really done it for us and put middle aged women and people who like romances. We need to have a think about are target audience in more detail in a later task]

Other texts it reminds you of (intertextuality)
There where many answers to this which could be a good thing or a bad thing because if it reminds them to much of a film it could become predictable but if it doesnt remind them of anything then then could not get the genre. there were many answers e.g P.s i love you, notebook, romeo and juliet etc this is proberly a good thing because not every one has put the same thing so it doesnt look like we have copied and plot already.

Potential Problems
There was the same problem that kept raising up which was if we was not alowed to use the song. If this is so then we shall simply find a free copyright song.Also somebody had put that we needed it to rain to film the first scene but we are simply goin to get a shower head type fitting to put on top of a hose and spray in front of camera which shud seem enogh and then when it comes to the shot looking through the windown we shall spray the window. Another problem was that the actors need to be good and be able to show true emotions we thought this problem through and we thought it shall be good to use my sister as she is a drama student and her boyfriend so it makes it more realistic to her, but this araised another problem which was the age of the actors because my sister is only 14 and her boyfriend is 15 although we could proberly make them look slightly older not enough to make it realistic though so then we thought of some thing else but we wanted them to use there boyfriend/girlfriend in it so it makes it more realistic for them and show there true emotions to each other, we then realised that we have a friend who has a girlfriend who he is comftable with and he has also done acting like this before, he is 17 and if any thing looks alot older, all we need to do is ask and this would be our problem solved!

Positive Comments
there was alot of good feedback and this was the box that was mainly filled in which was good. The main aspect they thought was good was the amatuer filming after the credits which gives the audience a real idea of how good the characters relationship was and shows the audience how much of a loss it was to the girlfriend.

Advise/suggestions
There was alot of answers to this aswell one was that there would be to many flashbacks and mabye the girlfriend could find and read the letter after he dies which is a very good idea that we shall take into consideration. Another suggsetion was that how are we goin to make it clear that it is hoom footage on the amatuer filming, we shall do this by puttin the camera settings on a bad quality and on the editing program we use is has effects to make the clip look old.