1st draft design

This is are 1st draft design; it is rough and is not up to the standard we wanted at the moment. We need to improve the lighting within the acting scene when it goes into the window and the characters is dieing on the floor; we need bright lights so the audience can see the scene correctly and it will make it more effective. We used the fish eye on some bits which made some of the scene cut of a little bit on the edges, this is bad because the camera changes from fish back to normal which may confuse the audience. The characters voice is not clear which takes the effectiveness out of the emotional scene because the audience will struggle to hear the emotion in the women's voice. Also we need to improve the music transaction where it switch's music, this will make it look more professional. As well as we need a variety of camera shots in the death scene to create panic and show this to the audience. Finally we need to dress the actors in more formal cloths which represent the characters better this will make it look more effective and show the audience what the characters are like from just there clothes. All these things we need to improve to are draft design, but we did it quick because we did not have a enough time therefore not making it up to a high standard.